March 13, 2017

How to Write a Novel: Make a Plan

This has been an exciting week for me. I finally launched my debut novel and have even gotten quite a few sales. I've heard from other authors that the best way to market a book is to write another one. So, if all goes well, I'll launch another sci-fi novel later this year.

Today, I'm starting a series on how to write a novel. We'll begin before pen even hits paper or fingers ever touch the keyboard.

To read the rest of the series, click on the links below:



How to Write a Novel

Step 0: Make a Plan


I'm what the writing community would call a pantser: someone who writes by the seat of their pants. I sit down at my keyboard without making a detailed outline to go by and just start typing. But that doesn't mean you should just start writing whatever comes to your head without coming up with some sort of plan first or else you'll end up with a rambling mess. 

Start with a basic idea


This can be anything from a conflict, to a character, to a setting. Your idea will be caring your novel, so pick something interesting. When you tell people your idea, the response you want people to say, "that's F*^%ing cool!" Otherwise, you'll end up writing a book you're not passionate about that no one will want to read. For The End of Refuge, my first idea was that I wanted a story about people trapped in a bomb shelter.

Got an idea? Great! If not, here's some help finding one.

Who's your main character?


Once you've got a basic idea, start making the main character to lead us through your story. Your character needs a personality, interests, occupation, physical description, and most importantly a goal. Using Batman as an example, Bruce Wayne is an interesting character, but without his goal of protecting Gotham, all the Batman comics/books/movies/video games would fall flat. I decided to make my protagonist Juliet: a young woman who's goal is to live a normal life.

Something needs to get in their way


To avoid a meandering plot, a novel needs a central conflict. This takes the shape of something big that gets between the protagonist and their goal. Batman wants to keep Gotham safe, so something needs to come in and make it unsafe. Make the central conflict interesting and difficult. Summing up your main character, their goal, and what gets in their way will make your elevator pitch and should make someone curious of how or even if the character will reach their goal. What gets in the way of Juliet living a normal life? Her shelter can no longer sustain the population living there, so the end is coming.

Who's the antagonist?


Someone (or some time something) has to set in motion the events that make up the central conflict of your story. The antagonist doesn't necessarily have to be chaotic evil, they just need to have a goal which directly opposes the protagonist's goal. The antagonist in The End of Refuge is a politician. He's not an evil person, he just want's something different than Juliet.

Pick a setting


I already had a setting picked out from my original idea, but that's not always the case. If you haven't already, decide where and when all the action in your novel will take place. You could have your novel take place a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away, in the present in New York City, or anything else.

Who will help your main character?


Yes, the protagonist can stumble through the plot all by themselves, but more often than not, they'll need people alongside them. Anyone working with the protagonist should be introduced early in the novel, so go ahead and flesh those characters out before you begin.

Once you have all of those items set, you've got enough of a plan to start drafting! Clearly missing right now is the build up to the central conflict and the resolution. I like to figure these parts out as I write. Other writers like to outline all of this ahead of time. There are plenty of tutorials out there on how to outline a novel. I'm not going to get into that because I personally don't work from an outline.

March 11, 2017

Book Review: The Gender War by Bella Forrest

The Gender War by Bella Forrest
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

After being sorely disappointed by the third book in this series, I tempered my expectations for the next installment. I still found myself a bit disappointed by the end.

Book 3 ended with an unexpected twist. Unfortunately, the big reveal didn't really impact anything. Desmond and her allegiances don't play a role in The Gender War at all. Instead, we follow Violet and Viggo and their fellow liberators as they try to prevent a war between the two nations. Unfortunately, I just don't care what happens to either nation, so I had a hard time sticking with this book.

A lot of my complaints on the previous book continue into this one. There's no real main story arc in the novel. There's very little lead up to the ending action scene/climax. Instead, the book reads as a series of events which Violet and Viggo stumble through before they're dragged into yet another 'epic' battle.

I thought the premise of the first book, The Gender Game, was a little silly, but still enjoyable. I loved the next book which really developed the relationship between Violet and Viggo. I feel like books three and four have lost the spirit which originally attracted me, and I'm just not attached enough to the lead characters to see what happens next. I'm going to have to wish Violet and Viggo the best in their future endeavors and say farewell.

March 7, 2017

Today is Release Day for The End of Refuge!

It's finally here:

The End of Refuge releases today!



When I was in college, my University's entire fiction collection fit on a single low bookshelf. By the time I graduated, I had read most of those books. College-aged me never would have believed that I would one day write my own book. I was studying math to become an engineer or lecturer. I aspired to write academic papers, not prose. It's funny how life takes unexpected turns. But now, I can proudly say, "I am an author."

I wanted to write a story about a typical person in a unique setting. There is nothing special about Juliet. She isn't the chosen one. She doesn't have any special abilities. She's just a young woman navigating life. But, her story isn't typical. Even a normal, humble person can rise to the occasion and find a way to persevere. Juliet's tale is that of finding the inner strength to overcome even the most challenging circumstances.

When I started writing The End of Refuge, I set out to write an exciting adventure steeped in mystery with a healthy dose of romance. I thoroughly enjoyed writing this book and sincerely hope you enjoy reading it.

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March 6, 2017

The Pros Don't Word Process, They Typeset

Last week I talked a little about how I was unsure about purchasing yet another copy of Word. I think I've found the answer:

Forget Word.

Learn InDesign.

When I first mentioned to my husband that I decided to use yet another new software in my book making endeavors, he raised an eyebrow and asked if I was sure. I've done a lot of complaining, all of which he has graciously listened to, about the pains of formatting a novel. Typesetting programs have a bit of a steep learning curve, but it certainly can't be worse than fighting with a word processor.

I've heard over and over that Typesetting software will make a much nicer looking book, but at first, I was slow to believe this. However, after trying to use images for scene breaks and chapter headings only to have my text do funky things and jump around the page, I figured InDesign would be worth checking out.

As with anything new I try, I turned to YouTube to get a handle on the basics. Forty minutes later, I think I can do this.

I've made a template for my next novel, but I won't be able to really gauge how it will work until I get the whole novel in there. But before I do that, my novel needs to be print-ready first. Until then, my manuscript belongs in text editor land.

On the bright side, the editor I'm hiring has agreed to use Google Docs so I may be able to get by without purchasing another word processor!